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Computer1109
08-03-2010, 12:13 AM
The Last Survivor Series By Computer 1109

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Author's Notes :

This one was put up a little early, but is basically empty without any words or pictures. The next one will probably be better in comparison.
The last slide and first slide are bad. Both the control panel and the smoke are in squares, which makes absolutely no sense.
The lines are messed up. Can't do much about that.

Anyway, hoped you guys liked it somewhat. I'll be putting the next one up at some point soon.

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Author's Notes :

I just love this one. I added a little laugh to settle down from the dramatic last chapter, and then putting it all back on your shoulders on the last panel.

Some things are unanswered (I couldn't even fit into the "Where am I" question, wow) but will be answered next chapter.

I really thought on that last panel (lol death star) but you all know that isn't going to happen!

The Last Survivor Four :

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Author's Notes :

So...long...
That issue took so long to make! The first thing you might see is there's an extra line this issue...needed all of that space and more (as you could see at the bottom left hand corner)

However, I am very satisfied with the results of this chapter. The lore was fun to write, even though for some it might be boring. However, it is very important to the series, so just live with it if you don't like it. There's going to be another big (probably) chapter about the past next chapter.

This may be my favorite chapter so far, so LIKE IT. (jk)

EDIT : The actual story for him knowing Captain is going to take a while to develop in my head (making it up as I go) so sorry if you're waiting and it's not there yet

The Last Survivor Five :

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Author's Notes :

Alright, finally got the fifth up and ready. If you are confused by the blue text after reading it, they are flashbacks going back to the time when Cpt. Jim found their planet.
This one took a long time too, and on top of that there are more lines so it is even more reading to do.
Hope you enjoyed it!

WildWarren
08-03-2010, 07:20 PM
Cool!

Nitromonkey!
08-05-2010, 09:35 AM
can't wait to see what happens next! :D

ManiacMonkey
08-05-2010, 10:05 AM
what do you think wat will happen next

im thinking their going to land on the Crash Landing map

Computer1109
08-05-2010, 10:24 PM
im thinking their going to land on the Crash Landing map


That's what you would think, heh. I'm probably going to involve the crash landing map in the future though.
My explanation might feel stupid though. (Going to put it in next chapter.) Still kind of trying to work out the parts.

zana
08-06-2010, 12:33 AM
nice !!!

speedstack610
08-06-2010, 09:30 PM
I like this story, Its full of suspense and a really cool story

Computer1109
08-06-2010, 11:12 PM
I like this story, Its full of suspense and a really cool story


impressive!

Thanks guys, really appreciate the comment!

driftkingz109
08-06-2010, 11:20 PM
impressive!

Computer1109
08-08-2010, 06:25 AM
"The Last Survivor Five" is now up on the first post.

drago
08-22-2010, 02:30 PM
Lol i guess i have to give you credit for writing that...But why would you take time to do something like this?

Computer1109
08-23-2010, 05:37 AM
Lol i guess i have to give you credit for writing that...But why would you take time to do something like this?

I got bored basically.

draco999
09-04-2010, 04:59 PM
its really cool

killerargue
01-20-2011, 09:11 PM
One word: Awesome and long lol :D

tobylee
01-20-2011, 09:17 PM
Cool!


hello warren again lolxxzzzz so is this where u get ideas for u comics?? lolzz just kiddin:):):):):mad::mad::eek::rolleyes::rolleyes:: (:(:confused::confused::cool::(:(:D

Dragon Slayer
01-20-2011, 09:21 PM
I liked this :D (It was long though but still Liked it xD )

WildWarren
01-20-2011, 09:37 PM
hello warren again lolxxzzzz so is this where u get ideas for u comics?? lolzz just kiddin:):):):):mad::mad::eek::rolleyes::rolleyes:: (:(:confused::confused::cool::(:(:D

I'm the original Mine was invented March 2010 Seriously?

wild_ones_master
01-20-2011, 10:10 PM
wow that was long but nice good work

saifnor
01-22-2011, 12:47 AM
lol word is too small, cant read XD